why did u scold?
to make u bold,
and shine like gold......
and reach the aimed destination one day.......
and without doing any mistake u shall reach your shore.
i cant believe your thinking can go down at such rate!
that makes all things done vain
n don't believe or do things that are just"allusion"
but i can convert u in good curvature.
nothing more i just want to say"sorry"
by:Jasdeep
to make u bold,
and shine like gold......
why dont u talk with me,say?
to let you to walk on right way,and reach the aimed destination one day.......
ok..but tell y did u ignore ,me?
so that u shall not repeat any mistake like before,and without doing any mistake u shall reach your shore.
why did u hate ,me?
before asking this ques u just wait,i cant believe your thinking can go down at such rate!
sorry, but i ask you why i repeat mistakes again n again?
huh,its your wicked brain,that makes all things done vain
does it have any solution?
hmm...yes, run away your confusion,n don't believe or do things that are just"allusion"
and what about my wicked nature?
you r not wicked but u r stupid creature,but i can convert u in good curvature.
oh.... :( i talked so rubbish about u, i did many mistakes,
i did all things in haste,
i spend my precious time in waste.
oh, now u don't worry,
n plz next time don't create any curry,
is something left to say, i m in hurry.
oh, yes
i wanna wish u "happy teachers day" my teacher......................................................................by:Jasdeep
( red: child)
( purple:teacher)
Very well written once again. GOOD!
ReplyDeleteYou are lucky you got such teachers.
I am unlucky I didn't got such teachers when I was studying and after reading your poem I am feeling unlucky because no student think about me such!
Jasdeep I want you to read this on teacher's day. What say?
ReplyDeleteok.....i'll sir!
ReplyDeleten plz don't feel unlucky, because there are numerous students who think that you are their, mentor- who'll leave no stone unturned to make their life successful...........
ReplyDeleteNICE CREATION
ReplyDeleteTHINGS THAT DISCUSSED ABOVE IN YOUR COMP..
WAS TOTALLY SO SIMPLE TO HEAR
BUT WAS UNCONDITIONALLY OUT OF THE WORLD
WHO UNDERSTOOD YOUR MESSAGE
IS BRILLANT TOO GAL
SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN YAAR..........
ReplyDeleteME TOO SO IMPRESSED!!!
CONTINUE POETRY.......GD 4 U