Wednesday 31 August 2011

what can i say.......................................!!

why did u scold?
to make u bold,
and shine like gold......

why dont u talk with me,say?
to let you to walk on right way,
and reach the aimed destination one day.......

ok..but tell  y did u ignore ,me?
so that u shall not repeat any mistake like before,
and without doing any mistake u shall reach your shore.

why did u hate ,me?
before asking this ques u just wait,
i cant believe your thinking can go down at such rate!

sorry, but i ask you  why i repeat mistakes again n again?
huh,its your wicked brain,
that makes all things done vain

does it have any solution?
hmm...yes, run away your confusion,
n don't believe or do things that are just"allusion"

and what about my wicked nature?
you r not wicked but u r stupid creature,
but i can convert u in good curvature.

oh.... :( i talked so rubbish about u, i did many mistakes,
i did all things in haste,
i spend my precious time in waste.

nothing more i just want to say"sorry"

oh, now u don't worry,
n plz next time don't create any curry,
is something left  to say, i m in hurry.

oh, yes
i wanna wish u "happy teachers day" my teacher......................................................................

                                                                                                               by:Jasdeep
( red: child)
( purple:teacher)

6 comments:

  1. Very well written once again. GOOD!

    You are lucky you got such teachers.
    I am unlucky I didn't got such teachers when I was studying and after reading your poem I am feeling unlucky because no student think about me such!

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  2. Jasdeep I want you to read this on teacher's day. What say?

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  3. n plz don't feel unlucky, because there are numerous students who think that you are their, mentor- who'll leave no stone unturned to make their life successful...........

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  4. NICE CREATION
    THINGS THAT DISCUSSED ABOVE IN YOUR COMP..
    WAS TOTALLY SO SIMPLE TO HEAR
    BUT WAS UNCONDITIONALLY OUT OF THE WORLD
    WHO UNDERSTOOD YOUR MESSAGE
    IS BRILLANT TOO GAL

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  5. SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN YAAR..........
    ME TOO SO IMPRESSED!!!
    CONTINUE POETRY.......GD 4 U

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